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I Can't Stop Crying Today

I can't stop crying today
My world walked out the door
With her she took my heart
For I will love no more

The hours passed like seconds
When our two hearts were one
The seconds passed like hours
After she said that she was done

She was going to love me forever
At least that is what she said
Her heart belonged to someone else
That is what her letter read

I no longer live in color
My world is black and white
I always wonder what she is doing
As I lie awake at night

I hope tomorrow is better
This is what I pray
But right now my heart is broken
I can't stop crying today

by Brandon
posted on 09/07/2008

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Comments: 460

Comment by nickfronzi: Oct 22, 2016 3:54 pm
Amazing poem. this really hit me hard.
Comment by Kumoriko: Mar 19, 2016 8:18 pm
You are a talented writer!
Comment by raylord: May 26, 2015 8:55 pm
Really hard hitting poem
Comment by emofaith: Jun 5, 2014 9:47 pm
woah!why did I just read this poem today, when its been here for years..
Comment by EvalyRose: Jul 19, 2013 8:44 am
I know how u feel amazing poem read some of my and comments thanks
Comment by PoeticPrincess: Feb 26, 2013 4:49 pm
So sad but nicely written
Comment by hurtheart18: Dec 14, 2012 9:12 pm
beautiful
Comment by chasedbythetruth: Apr 11, 2012 1:30 pm
one word WINNER
Comment by Naazilicious: Apr 10, 2012 12:11 pm
Awesome, love it
Comment by Listain: Mar 29, 2012 10:57 pm
I have felt this pain before, Truly amazing how you capture the feeling well.

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