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Love Is Only A Word:

Don't even want to try amymore
cause I always seem to fail,
Love is only a word full of meaningless ****,that always puts me through hell!
The three words are always used to help people get what
ever they want from you,
Just to crush and shatter a
beautiful heart,after your used,your life is through.
Now you can't trust again,find it hard to love and can;t forget the pain,
They scar your heart,**** with your emotions and then you go insane.
When I say I love you,I meant it,cherished it and take it to the heart,
If you don't mean it,don't say
it so the pain and suffering won't start.

by BehindTheseGreenEyes
posted on 09/28/2010

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Comments: 16

Comment by EvalyRose: Jul 19, 2013 9:03 am
I can totally relate to his specially now great poems keep up the great work I posted some new one so please check it out sometime Smiley
Comment by Nick1959: Feb 13, 2012 2:06 am
Well I understand the feelings your expressing the end of a,relationship is hard but also a new begining.
I would suggest that when your writing to try to feel the emotions you wish to express, write it down then look it over then work on the form and flow. Don't give up not everyone will like your work . Just keep writing

Comment by prettyspl: Feb 11, 2012 10:46 pm
I wanted to read this mainly because of all the negative remarks; like I wanted to know what people were thinking about this piece and so much negativity. I actually thought the actual poem was pretty good! You do need to 'clean up' the writing but all in all; it's not so bad. I think you should continue writing and I think it's a good outlet for you and a place to put your pain. Good luck...
Comment by Psychobabble: Sep 16, 2011 11:40 pm
I like this, i can relate. - Lee
Comment by ScarletSorrows: Dec 16, 2010 7:53 am
but it is good as ive said before and i do like it but there is a big age gap
Comment by ScarletSorrows: Dec 16, 2010 7:52 am
well i dont think this is very good and i agree with dayani for once this is well like a 16 year old wrote it....
Comment by chaos128: Oct 26, 2010 2:36 pm
BTGE, if you're constantly failing, it's because you undertake your emotional adventures with failure the uppermost thing in your mind, making failure the road events you're involved in are most likely to take. Don't even entertain the word, failure. Just ig it! And make it clear that every project you start, has only one possible conclusion: 100% spectacular success, every single time : )
Comment by Dayani: Oct 13, 2010 12:25 am
Typos. Sorry.

You are not, and therefore shouldn't sound like it.

I didn't mean to write "today" twice in one clause, I just rewrote part of it and didn't change the beginning. Oops.
Comment by Dayani: Oct 13, 2010 12:23 am
Excuse me for being blunt, but I'm constantly being told I'm rude when I'm trying to help people improve, and so I'm just going to say it.

BehindTheseGreenEyes, you're full of ****, as Pretty so eloquently pointed out.

You contradict yourself, your poems are not particularly poetic and, often enough, the content makes you look like a 16 year old slut.

You are ont, and therefore you shouldn't sound like it.
It makes you look dreadful.

You can't spell, you can't take criticism and you can't take the time to edit your work, even after its flaws have been pointed out.

You are petulant, childish and irritating.

I've had it up to here with people starting churlish little flame wars with me because their poems weren't brilliant and I told them so (and generally how to fix it, though I've given up with a few of you). You make me ill, and I'm sick of it.

I signed in today to eighteen new mails today, all from people like you, who cannot take criticism and don't edit their work, then get offended when I tell them they misspelled something.

You're a grown woman, for god's sake. You have no excuse for being churlish, ignorant, ill mannered or rude.

I've written more than I intended to, and I'd delete it, except almost everyone to whom this ought be directed reads and loves your "poetry". So I think I'll leave it there, for everyone to see.

Oh, and before you tell me I'm childish, I'm fifteen years old. If I get to be petulant and pathetic at any point in my life, it's now.

What's your excuse?
Comment by PrettyOdd: Oct 12, 2010 5:16 pm
44 of your 60 poems have colons at the end of the titles. It does look bad, and it's obviously not an error. If it was, you would have fixed it, and there wouldn't be so many.

What makes you think the people of this site are supposed to understand? This is a place for poetry, not support. I'd also like to point out that you yourself said you wrote this because you were bored, not because you were feeling broken hearted and needed to let your emotions out. You were bored. That's it.

And I'm having a hard time figuring out why you can't put spaces in between words and punctuation marks.
Poets put effort into their work, you know. They put their heart and soul into their work, they check and edit their work, and if someone has a suggestion as to how they can improve, they listen. And they improve.

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