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nice guys finish last

Here comes a poem about all the nice guys that finish last
Getting politely "blown off" its just gonna be another page in the horrific past
Now don't take this as obsession or try to call me mad,
but the day a girl finally wants me maybe then i might be glad

Now words spoken from a drunken tongue
Get disregarded as you've spoken none

Now usually poetry is not my thing,
but why must girls think I'm looking for a fling

So now the words I've spoken are forgotten just paper trails left in time
Waiting for them to trace back then maybe everything will be fine

Going back to nice guys and the race they just don't win
While the players out there just take advantage of these girls and they don't quickly forget him

Sure time is needed to forget the pains and hurt from the past
Maybe life would be blissful if you new you could do 10 times better than the guys who are an ass

If someone has the guts to be straight up decent to you
Then don't stuff them around and make them think your straight up decent too

So now things are back to normal and you've made another friend
At this rate seems like no one really "likes" me in the end

So its at the point I'm thinking girls are attracted to guys who act like dicks,
Maybe its time to stop being nice I'll treat them all like ****

Grabbing girls by the arm might make me feel like a man
or pushing shoving swearing I don't want to do this its not who i am

I guess it makes me stronger for persisting being nice
Getting knocked back by chicks I'm not saying they all have hearts cold as ice

You can not get mad or blame a girl for how they feel,
But don't tell the guy in the future a relationship might reveal

Tell them straight up your looking for a guy who treats girls like ****
and when it comes to your mentality your just not big enough a dick

So please be honest
please be nice
tell them there's no future chance
please just saying we're friends who on a Friday night will dance

Don't tell them that you'll call them when you head out on the town,
Because the person who's your so called "new friend" might just end up with a frown

by newtopoems
posted on 10/19/2008

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Comments: 17

Comment by newtopoems: Jun 10, 2009 7:07 am
is there anywhere i can send my poems in hopes to get them published, i mean i dont expect them to be. Just curious is all.
Comment by PrettyOdd: Nov 14, 2008 8:51 pm
I have to say, not all nice guys finish last. I personally don't understand why a lot of girls (including some of my friends) are so into the "bad boy" thing. I would much rather have someone treat me with respect. Anyway, great poem. Keep up the good work.
Comment by scarredemotions17: Nov 9, 2008 6:13 pm
thats a very good poem and it is so ****in true. i love the way u write
Comment by DarkDevotions: Nov 3, 2008 3:58 pm
Chivalry is not dead. It never died at all...people just stopped looking for it. The true "Good Guys" like me and you just get looked over. However...with Chivalry comes patience...and patience is the key. If you keep trying and wait it out...you will find your soulmate. You're other half is out there looking for you just as you are looking for them. So be patient my friend...the time will come when you find each other.

~DarkDevotions
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Oct 23, 2008 8:14 am
Exactly, I agree with AFireInYourEyes18. Alot of girls want someone who will love them, treat them nice and overall just be there for them. You seem to be that kind of guy. Who ever gets you is going to be a very lucky person Smiley
Comment by AFireInYourEyes18: Oct 21, 2008 9:35 am
wow its good man. yeah i agree but not all girls want a dick. some are actually looking for a heart
Comment by FairDarkness: Oct 21, 2008 8:47 am
I understand it all. I'm with you on this
Comment by cutiepie: Oct 21, 2008 8:16 am
awwww, not all girls lke guys like that, and don't blame all the girls for what one girls thinks about another thing, we are all different, keep ur chin up u'll meet some really great girl, who will like u for who you r, not who ur trying to be, just be yourself everything will fall into placeSmiley great poem
Comment by xcrabsxrxnotxfoodx: Oct 21, 2008 8:14 am
great poem
Comment by Sunshines4eva: Oct 20, 2008 3:10 pm
I agree with heartless angel - really good poem tho

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