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What If I Died Tomorrow?

What if I died tomorrow?
Would anyone care?
Every night I try to dream,
Of what you wanted me to be.
If I died tomorrow,
Would you miss me?
I shed tears thinking,
Of how my hopes are sinking.
What if I died tomorrow?
Would anyone remember me?
I wonder if you'd cry for me,
And the life I'd never see.
If I died tomorrow,
Would you feel some sorrow?
What if this were the last time,
You ever spoke to me?
Tell me how you feel inside,
Because you never know,
If tomorrow I died.

by squirrelluver2
posted on 10/11/2008

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Comments: 15

Comment by Naomi: Nov 1, 2008 8:08 pm
I loved the way you put that. It's rather touching and gets you thinking.
Comment by therealb: Nov 1, 2008 5:50 pm
its really good!!! a lot of emotion in this
Comment by madz13379: Nov 1, 2008 9:02 am
Very thoughtful and emotional, good work
Comment by xoxlostlovexox: Oct 25, 2008 2:01 pm
you are an amazing
writer Smiley
Comment by matt23: Oct 24, 2008 6:50 pm
Very touching poem. I think we all contemplate the way we are valued by others at some point. I liked it.
Comment by poeticangel102: Oct 23, 2008 2:16 pm
wow, i love this poem, i am saving, and sending it to all my friends, you are very talented
Comment by christi823: Oct 17, 2008 9:38 pm
a lot of peoplean relate.
i sure can.

very lovely poem.
Comment by LUBNA: Oct 17, 2008 1:36 am
woow woow woow
really i like it
i read it many times it's so beaytiful
Comment by innersadofme: Oct 15, 2008 9:30 pm
this my first day here and comment...yes like what fairdarkness said...i dont know u..but i care if u died..its touch me with this poem
Comment by kissofinsanity18: Oct 15, 2008 8:42 pm
I have felt like this. Poems help

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