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You make me complete

When you´re with me I feel complete,
that proves me you´re the one I need.
When you´re not with me the days become longer,
the feeling - I miss you- becomes even stronger.

I see you when it’s bright outside -
I feel you when I sleep at night.
I have still no words to praise you right -
to me your smile is brighter than sunlight.

You’re the only girl who has made me feel this way -
you make my heart rumble – I forget what to say.
But sometimes there´s no need for words
Just know for me you mean the world.

From the bottom of my heart- you’re irreplaceable,
want to spend my life with you- you’re indispensable

by sion
posted on 01/19/2010

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Comments: 2

Comment by ptjh02: Jan 19, 2010 8:16 pm
i feel the same loved it otherwise
Comment by ordinarycanary: Jan 19, 2010 2:48 pm
Uh I really like it except that last couplet, I mean, I don't mean to go hating your love but I feel it's not needed. Otherwise, great poem. Smiley

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