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You Really Suck

No words to say no thoughts to think
Just tears to cry and the feeling of letting my heart sink
Thanks for turning my heart of gold
Into an empty hole, blank, and cold
I really hate you, I don't know what to say
I just don't know if I can go through like this every day
Faking a smile and a feeling of cheer
When really I don't know why I'm even here
You keep bringing me up to crush me down
While turning my smile into a frown
I think I fell in love with you just by your luck
Because truthfully, you really suck

by NaturalBeauty
posted on 04/07/2010

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Comments: 38

Comment by brokenlovexoxo: Nov 22, 2010 10:26 am
great job...i relate. Smiley
Comment by RaBBiT: Sep 16, 2010 6:38 pm
nicee... =]
Comment by grlonfire: Sep 2, 2010 9:24 am
Very good. Smiley
Comment by MyHeartBeatsInThree: Jul 5, 2010 12:53 am
I relate to this like looking in the mirror. very good. keep writing.
Comment by Skellous: Jun 15, 2010 8:27 am
I related to every line. I loved it, thank you.
Comment by donisha: Jun 11, 2010 12:28 am
I understand how you could feel that way. most relations do suck!
Comment by XDkenzieXD: Jun 6, 2010 1:43 pm
ughh exactly how i feel right now,Good Job!
Comment by ChickenFingers: Jun 6, 2010 6:51 am
hahaha, love it. Smiley
Comment by rsurfn2: Jun 5, 2010 11:07 am

That was great!
I think I know that guy.
Votes up.
Comment by lovestruckkid89: May 20, 2010 12:20 am

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