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i thought you were my friend

I thought you were my friend
But you were lying to me
The whole time I was with you
You never wanted to know me

I can now see you for who you are
The blackness surrounding you
Surrounding your body
Surrounding your existence
It sucks me in

Do you realize what a horrible feeling it is?
To not be wanted?
To be lied to?
I donít think you do.
Your inner soul is like hell
And your heart is filled with cement
You got what you wanted
Then pushed me aside, killing me
Is this how you treat others?
Or is it just me?

I hate you now
I really hate you
I detest your existence
I wish you would die
But will that happen?

I walked past your house today
It use to give me hope
Now it fills me with anger
I saw you yesterday
You walked past me like it was nothing
But it is something
I felt like strangling you
In fact I think I will

I want to murder you
I want to kill you
I want your life to recede
I want it to slip away
I want it done by my hands
i know it is murder
but it will happen, you better watch out.
I am going to kill you like you did me
I am coming back from the dead.

by CutMeOpenWide
posted on 10/27/2010

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Comments: 28

Comment by BurntVanilla: Jan 13, 2011 2:40 am
I can totally relate, Sad face I felt the same way towards an exfriend, I was totally crushed.
Don't listen to the hate on your poem. People shouldn't be criticizing others, its selfish and wrong because you never know how they'll take it. A lot of people on this website are suffering and hurting themselves, especially from very rude and mean criticism like THIS!
Don't listen to the rude things, you vented your feelings and I love it, its great<3
Comment by smtdl1823: Dec 6, 2010 7:27 am
makes me feel like that to someone.....great poem
Comment by hotino16: Nov 23, 2010 8:14 pm
I like it.^^
Comment by natasha: Nov 17, 2010 1:17 am
hey im new to dis site n the 1st peom i read waz urs n i loved it!!! it waz beautiful n i went through da same so i relate to it well Smiley
Comment by underneathitall: Nov 7, 2010 3:52 pm
CutMeOpenWide, keep writing, you only have the rest of your life to absorb knowledge and grow.
Comment by Dayani: Nov 1, 2010 1:49 am
Searching, grow up. There's no hate.
Also, don't tell people not to hate, an then call them assholes. It's childish and hypocritical.
Comment by Searching: Oct 31, 2010 12:51 am
Dont hate on peoples poetry, assholes.
Comment by BreeBree: Oct 29, 2010 2:19 am
Why do people presume that when I don't like their writing I am jealous of their lack of talent?
I mean, I have hardly any myself, but at least I put effort into mine.

"dont act like a child"
coming from someone who also said:
"i am only 14"
Well, since I am /only/ 14, I will act like a child; I am entitled to use it as an excuse if you are.

You're replying to me, you keep giving me things to say.
If you wanted me to stop commenting, you would have too by now.
Comment by CutMeOpenWide: Oct 28, 2010 9:05 pm
darkcobra is right.. dont say it was written in 10 seconds. dont act like a child are you jealous or something.i wrote this with my heart and if you are just going to diss it then stop commenting its not helping anyone. thank you
Comment by DarkCobra: Oct 28, 2010 7:34 am
...can't we just all get along?

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