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Noise, Noise, Noise

There are 3 different tvs
blaring 3 different shows.
The computer is on
blasing a song,
that makes my ears bleed.
The fan is shouting over everything
just to be heard.
The laptop plays the news with
voices louder than a blowhorn.
I'm on my 4th asprin
and I'm close to an explosion.
Where's a mute button when you need one?

by PenandPaper
posted on 07/14/2009

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Comments: 9

Comment by PrincePadfoot: Aug 12, 2009 9:13 am
Cool Smiley
Comment by Cye: Jul 26, 2009 12:34 pm
Awesome, like it!
Comment by Silvertonge: Jul 26, 2009 11:27 am
noise pollution...gotta hate it (the noise not the poem Sticking tongue out )
Comment by WidexInnocentxEyes: Jul 22, 2009 6:56 pm
I love the feel that you gave it. Free verse is very good when you just wanna let things out. All in all, even though the poem is short the detail that you give makes people relate to it more. Smiley
Comment by rainingtears: Jul 20, 2009 1:16 am
lol =]
Comment by jnicholas711: Jul 15, 2009 8:29 pm
good job
Comment by soffi: Jul 14, 2009 9:44 pm
Comment by PenandPaper: Jul 14, 2009 4:02 pm
Comment by paxson00: Jul 14, 2009 11:10 am
i like it because from what i read you didnt try to rhyme and funny poems especaly dont need to always rhyme.also i have had days like this so i like that i can relate. good work!

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