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Rain, at last

Night in fierce battle against raging sun

Wind spectator, dancing carelessly through the sky,
running it nimble fingers over the land

Trees gathered, spreading their branches upward,
waiting for God to speak

Dry earth exposed itself to the heavens, hoping

Mountains raised their stony faces,
their whispered song carried away with the breeze

Animals and people scurried,
hiding in holes and homes,
read signs from the clouds

Silence for a moment.
And then it happened
seeping into the cracked ground
Splitter, splatter of joy
Filling waterholes and childrens mouths
silencing cries and pleas.

Rain, at last

by mooxD
posted on 05/10/2009

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Comments: 2

Comment by JNYCE: May 10, 2009 8:52 am
this is amazing. I wrote a poem about the rain before but yours is a lot better lol... I love the rainSticking tongue out
Comment by volleyballLOVER: May 10, 2009 8:36 am
omg this is AMAZING! i love it! the comparison and details u used make it come to life, i just can't get over how great this is!

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