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Taking The Pain Away

It rips away, tearing life,
Until you want to die.
It hurts to stand, to walk, to live,
You say you see it in my eyes.
I thought there was no hope for me,
I thought that I was doomed.
The instant you came into my life,
It seemed that happiness bloomed.
You made my tears stop falling,
You made my smile grow.
Thanks to you I'm happy,
Too happy to even show.
Before you I was a wrecking ball,
A waste of human life.
Thanks to all the love you gave,
I'll never again use that knife.

by SisterofDarkness
posted on 05/10/2007

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Comments: 6

Comment by bubblishous310: May 11, 2007 8:28 am
wow this is the best poem i have ever read because i can relate to every word its awesome!
Comment by BlackRoseMaiden: May 11, 2007 7:15 am
i love this poem it reminds me of what just happened to me great job
Comment by tearsofrain: May 10, 2007 7:18 pm
does a safety pin count?? JOKE. not a funny one, but still...
he meant craziness in your eyes, not pain. haha.
but i do see pain in yours eyes, but only when your lost in thought.
Comment by nickson104: May 10, 2007 12:41 pm
woah awesomeness
Comment by aCrazyApe: May 10, 2007 10:13 am
I know how you feel. Every word in this poems describes a piece of my life. Now im even more depressed after reading this. GREAT JOB!!!!
Comment by kayla: May 10, 2007 10:03 am

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