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I canít take much more of this

Flickering out
Like a candle in a hurricane
Losing my mind
Set the fire just
To watch the flame

Burning page after page
Full of rage
Iím getting sick of this
And Iím not gonna miss
Any of it at all
So watch
This will be my final fall

Do you know me?
Do you really know
All the pain I keep from you?

Do you care?
Does it matter to you?
You see me falling
What are you going to do?

Just ****ing leave me alone
I donít need you
And I may never come back home

Iíve taken a lot
But really Iím not
All that strong
So just back the **** off

Iíve had enough
I canít take this
Iíve got my own problems
Iíve got my own pains
Take care of yourself from now on

I want to be there for you in the end
But Iím not your best friend
I canít take the constant fighting
I canít take the constant yelling
I canít take the constant lying
And I canít take sides

I canít take much more
Iím sick of looking at the two of you
Passed out on the floor

Get up
Get a clue
Cause I canít take
Much more of you

by DarkestAngle
posted on 07/10/2009

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Comments: 5

Comment by azaLea: Jul 16, 2009 6:28 am
Strong emotions..

Written very well..
Comment by Acheron: Jul 10, 2009 4:44 pm
Do you care?
Does it matter to you?
You see me falling
What are you going to do?


this is a wonderful poem, its full of sorrow rage almost hatered
but you know as wel las i your strong,
and that every single one of your friends are here to catch you

I love you
Comment by Aiden666: Jul 10, 2009 2:31 pm
I like this part

Do you care?
Does it matter to you?
You see me falling
What are you going to do?

But just remember,just because they won't catch you
doesn't meen we won't
We're all here for you
You'll be ok
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Jul 10, 2009 10:30 am
WOW! I DEFINITELY agree with xxxBLOODLUSTxxx! you're strong. there's no other way to describe it! this is a very good one! the beginning of it pulled me in--I loved the similie:

Flickering out
Like a candle in a hurricane
Losing my mind
Set the fire just
To watch the flame

you're an amazing writer. Just stay strong girl! you'll pull through! I know you will.
Comment by xxxBLOODLUSTxxx: Jul 10, 2009 12:17 am
Iíve taken a lot
But really Iím not
All that strong
So just back the **** off

This is true
And it isn't
You HAVE taken alot
And you ARE strong

Amasing poem hun

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