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Stepping away

Trying my hardest to get out of the zone.
Actually I'm not, I'm sat here alone.
Not having a clue what i should do.
Just knowing, i have another day to get through.

I've got to give myself, a big kick up the bum.
Sitting here empty, doesn't get anything done.
Wallowing away, in a victim state.
Is something that i really hate.

There is so many more, worse off than me.
In fact, I'm really very lucky.
Life's made difficult by the things i can't have.
Selfish things, that I'm trying to grab.
All brought on by self pity.
It's not who i want to be, it doesn't feel pretty.

So i choose this day, to make a change.
Step away from a life that's deranged.
Embrace what i have and be happy with it all.
good or bad, i will do my best to stand tall.

by kayla
posted on 05/21/2007

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Comments: 7

Comment by darkangel69: May 23, 2007 9:47 am
Wow that is awesome. We all need to remimber someone is worse off than us.
Comment by footprints: May 21, 2007 11:20 pm
Great poem! I agree with 'sinnocence' the ease of your rhyme and flow make your work seem like a thoughtstream (which I guess it is). Really beautiful Smiley You'll be fine
Comment by nickson104: May 21, 2007 11:19 am
mechanical animals right Smiley awesome poem lolz love it Smiley and loads of us need you to advise us Smiley
Comment by Sinnocence: May 21, 2007 6:58 am
your poems are like the line between fine verse n thoughtstream. choose your path well young jedi.Smiley
Comment by missingmom: May 21, 2007 5:48 am
Great poem Kayla! Good advise for all of us to live by.
Comment by PoemWritingGuy: May 21, 2007 4:40 am
Wonderful poem Smiley
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: May 21, 2007 4:25 am
Good for you. Wish I had your attitude. Good poem.

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