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Unfair

I hold her so tenderly, so gently, with so much care,
For hours now I have done nothing but stare.

Her tiny little hands no bigger than my thumb,
Her tiny little nose no bigger than a crumb.

She will grow to be a success at everything she does,
She will never be a quitter or a failure like I was.

She will cure many diseases and help the cause for world peace,
She will see to stopping violence and that world hunger cease.

I said that she wasn't a quitter and I don't change my stance,
But this stillborn little girl never really had a chance.

by secretpoet
posted on 07/07/2007

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Comments: 520

Comment by Kumoriko: Mar 19, 2016 7:46 pm
Gah! [cries and grabs tissues.]

THIS IS SO SAD BUT WRITTEN SO WELL!!
Comment by TheDarkShadow: Aug 25, 2015 3:54 am
I agree with DeathAngel. It was unexpected ending, short but powerful.
Comment by SecretsLie: Jul 2, 2015 9:21 pm
great poem!
Comment by RainWillow21: May 26, 2015 9:11 pm
-cries- so sad, so beautiful. It's like a punch. Conveyed do clearly
Comment by Emma: Nov 20, 2014 7:46 am
This is sad Sad face
Comment by amourdeschevaux: May 22, 2014 5:57 pm
This is beautiful.
Comment by lucii101: Jun 5, 2012 7:47 pm
awwh that is so sad, yet amazing, Great job.
Comment by PoeticPrincess: Apr 14, 2012 2:31 pm
The unexpected ending brought a tear to my eye, this is very touching, beautiful poem
Comment by DeathAngel: Apr 11, 2012 10:10 pm
I love this poem. That unexpected ending strokes the human emotion to the border of tears. Very well done.

Keep up the great work.
Comment by 42sarah42: Apr 1, 2012 2:05 pm
beautiful..

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