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Diary of a Wretched Mind

Moments, pictures, captured time
Diary of wretched mind
sickened pleasure, twisted pain
Reliving sins soaked in vain
Seeking the cure to end my ways
Drowning before the end of days
Needles sink into to hollow veins
Darkness enveloping my thoughts of flight
The void swallowing every glimpse of light
Struggling to stay above the tension
Trigger finger in suspension
**** it all and did I mention
Condemned souls receive no mention
Its not pity that created me
It was the endless suffering
Endured at the hands of peril
Cutting with the jagged edge
Tainting the wounds of agony
If only I had the will to see
The lies you laid in front of me
choosing to suffer instead of believe
Inside lays dormant my disease
infection spread like prophecy
Despite my cries despite my pleas
If begged for mercy would you hear
Or have it fall upon deaf ears
Like a burlesque show set for the blind
A taste so sweet but bitter fed
Forever burning on wings of lead
Hearts beating in bodies dead
Life to lifeless
Casting silence, with words unsaid
Iím behind you, but still ahead
I was gone before you left

by majikmanmike
posted on 06/04/2011

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Comments: 10

Comment by PoeticPrincess: Jun 19, 2014 11:51 am
I love how this flows from one line to the next, great stuff!
Comment by emofaith: Jun 15, 2014 2:33 am
I like the flow of this poem; so much meaning.
Comment by Gary: Apr 20, 2012 8:50 am
Just a friendly reminder, you are seeing � in posts because you are most likely pasting "smart quotes" from Microsoft Word or Open Office. Smart quotes are not directly HTML friendly. So when you paste poems into the box, use ' instead.
Comment by prettyspl: Mar 26, 2012 11:29 am
So raw and pulsing with emotion; felt and believed every line. For me; this is poetry! Voting up!
Comment by Willowhisper: Mar 19, 2012 11:04 am
amazing
Comment by OnMyOwn: Jul 19, 2011 12:14 pm
That was.... AMAZING
Comment by darkdarkie: Jul 6, 2011 8:10 am
that was beautiful...
Comment by darkenedangel: Jun 5, 2011 7:51 pm
I....am at a lose for words. It was that amazing.
Comment by eris17: Jun 4, 2011 11:06 pm
my mind = BLOWN
Comment by anonymousme: Jun 4, 2011 10:48 am
...
stunning...
-claps- very good

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