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Dream Tonight

I am scared to close my eyes,
Scared to dream tonight,
You're waiting there for me,
Waiting patiently

I am looking to be found,
Looking all around
You're beating through my heart,
Beating me apart

I am backing from the truth,
Backing from my youth,
You're damage and disease
Here to damage me

I am scared to close my eyes,
Scared to dream tonight.


by Elizajh
posted on 11/29/2012

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Comments: 4

Comment by prettyspl: Oct 3, 2015 12:52 am
I like this .. the phases were catchy and good rhyme scheme. Well written.
Comment by schick15: Oct 1, 2015 12:33 pm
I like .
Comment by Elizajh: Nov 29, 2012 5:59 pm
No, my boyfriend and I just broke up and every time I go to sleep I dream of everything that happened. Not my father or anything like that lol
Comment by HiddenInSorrow: Nov 29, 2012 10:02 am
Confused as to why it is a broken heart poem, unless you are fearing for your life, if it is about your father being abusive, it is very well written to convey it, but it truly does speak very well, good rhyme scheme and flows quite well. Very nice overall, if you are truly scared, im sorry to hear it.

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