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Fallen Angel

I saw something last night that made me cry
A beautiful angel fell from the sky
Torn from someone she loved so much
She looked so fragile, I dared not touch
Her tears fell like a gentle rain
Trying to wash away her pain
I watched the glow around her die
With every tear came from her eye
I asked her ‘why are you this way?’
She softly whispered and turned to say
‘My wings are broken, it hurts to fly
It hurts so much, I dare not try’
Breached from someone she knew so well
Forsaken to this earthly hell
Knew that here she could not stay
Slowly got up and walked away
It made me wonder as she got on her feet
How many fallen now walk our streets?
Just how many have fell from above?
How many angels are killed by love?

by moonlightbroken
posted on 09/17/2007

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Comments: 30

Comment by Silvertonge: Nov 18, 2015 7:41 pm
This is beautiful and fantastic!!
Comment by fetatoo89: Aug 25, 2008 3:00 pm
That is really good i love itSmiley
Comment by Snoman: Apr 1, 2008 10:08 pm
again i've come back to emphasize how AMAZING this poem is... i don't cry but this is making me feel pretty close to it Smiley
Comment by leadme2temptation: Mar 15, 2008 2:29 pm
i love it! i had to read it twice deff. vote up
Comment by TheWanderingAngel: Jan 24, 2008 5:49 pm
great poem. It's one of my favorites.
Comment by blackjacket9: Oct 30, 2007 1:17 pm
excellent stuff.
Comment by starrynight001: Oct 30, 2007 9:23 am
wow! now this is a really great poem! and its about angels almost any poem with angels in them are good well i really liked your poem keep up the good work! cause you never know maybe somday you will be a great writerSmiley
Comment by nevaehleaangel: Oct 27, 2007 6:05 pm
omg........schooling guys at b-ball is one thing.but schooling us older wrighters,im mean im 37 and been wrighting poems for evr,but you young, lady r amazing.great job
Comment by moonlightbroken: Oct 22, 2007 6:14 am
hey everyone, i just wanted to say that i really do appreciate all your comments and your time that you used to read this. =]

x erika x
Comment by lifeisalivinghell16: Oct 19, 2007 12:02 pm
i love this poem your a great writer keep up the good work i think you will make a great writer one day

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