Poem of Quotes Members

Hello?

Hello?
Is anyone there?
I need some help?
I donít know what to do without you

I call looking for comfort
But instead you insult me
I call looking for love
But instead you push me away
I call looking for a friend
But instead you become an enemy
I call looking for a conversation
But instead you give me silence

You call to say youíre sorry
But now I donít forgive
You call looking for love
But now I push you away
You call looking for a friend
But now I become the enemy
You call looking for a conversation
But now I give you silence

Hello?
Is anyone there?
I need some help?
I have lost a friend
And I donít know what to do
I need someone to love?
Its just not you
Hello?
Is anyone out thereÖ??

by darknessfalls
posted on 08/20/2008

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Comments: 3

Comment by deathmonkey: Sep 8, 2008 4:28 pm
Smiley

Everyone's felt this way at some time or another. Only critical comment I can think of is it doesn't seem to have very much of a rhythm. Granted, not ALL poetry does, but most good poems do.

Sorry if I sound like a know-it-all.

Keep writing! The expertise comes with time.. and lots of practice -.-
Comment by NOangelsLEFT: Aug 20, 2008 8:01 am
nice poam
Comment by LostLover: Aug 20, 2008 2:40 am
hey, were all here, i love that poem i felt the same way when i went through jelousy with someone and i deeply cared about her

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