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Her

im so depressed
cant get any rest
you stuck my head
smells in my bed
i cant move on
i sing the same song
corner seat at the bar
someone plays a guitar
friends say to me
other fish in the sea
give it time you see
introduce girls to me


But i dont care
because they cant compare
their smiles dont make me smile
their jokes dont make me laugh
they eyes dont entrap
me like yours did

i know im a mess
and this i confess
your better then the rest
dont wanna settle for less
I felt her love
i can rise above
she perfect to me
beautiful you see
may be im crazy
friends say its too late
here go on a blind date


But i don't care
because they cant compare
their smiles don't make me smile
their jokes don't make me laugh
they eyes don't entrap
me like yours did

maybe its a sign
and maybe in time
you'll come back around
loves a battle ground


by Joey
posted on 07/11/2015

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Tags: random, ex, song, want her back
Comments: 3

Comment by prettyspl: Oct 17, 2015 1:11 am
Love can and is a battle ground ... depending on the players and games. I liked this albeit needs work insofar as grammar is concerned. Nice write! Smiley
Comment by SLIPshodSLIP: Sep 4, 2015 4:09 am
The concept of this poem can be understood from many perspectives. However the lack of grammar and punctuation doesn't allow me, the reader, to connect.
Comment by FavoriteTheMute: Jul 13, 2015 4:11 pm
How is love a battle ground? Such a curious way to end the poem. You gave no indication. I think it will be better to take out the last line. Lovely poem leading up to that point.

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