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His Mistake

what the hell was on your mind
gave up a good girl, for drink and drug
it may not sound articulate
but damn, how you ****ed up.

all the world
in the palm of your hand
the desert, the sea
at your every command

who cares about the outside
when someone has let you in
To my dying day I will never know
What it was that you
were thinkin'

Everything, everything gone now.
You can look at your life
in retrospect
Your present will be a memoir baby
Of things that you can't forget.

by golddustgirl
posted on 02/25/2010

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Comments: 7

Comment by RooftopsAndRaindrops: Feb 28, 2010 2:26 pm
Really really good, I can totally understand it.
Comment by tnhelos18: Feb 27, 2010 5:20 pm
this was really good
Comment by LittleDareDevil: Feb 26, 2010 1:02 pm
Very good poem
Comment by ashleykae: Feb 26, 2010 12:41 pm
I totally agree with PrettyOdd I LUV THAT PART TOO=P
But guys make decisions without thinking and not caring if they hurt the ones they luv and girls do it, too. Ive been in that same situation and it was ****ed up big time.
Comment by PrettyOdd: Feb 26, 2010 12:13 pm
"it may not sound articulate
but damn, how you ****ed up."

That made me smile because it's so true. Sometimes people reach a point where you can't get through to them with explanations and fancy, heartfelt words. Sometimes "you ****ed up" is really the only thing you can say.

"all the world
in the palm of your hand
the desert, the sea
at your every command"

You phrased that wonderfully. It's a pretty statement, and sad too.
Comment by bctenorio: Feb 26, 2010 9:14 am
THAT GREAT
Comment by Babigurlbroken: Feb 25, 2010 2:41 pm
I really like this poem.

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