Poem of Quotes Members

one (special) day alone

it hurt all day without you.
eleven months and this one day
without you here almost kills me
but there is nothing i can do

the pain numbs me to my core
and i forget that i am alive
so eating gets pushed to the side
sleep becomes something of effort

wishing to be with you every moment
but its just not happening
it was our eleven month anniversary
and both of us were alone for it

its the second one so far
we have spent alone
make it be the last please
or my heart will shatter

i just don't know what to do
because this time
there is nothing i can do
to bring you back to me

by AngelLee
posted on 12/12/2010

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Comments: 7

Comment by sunshinegirl: Jan 11, 2011 6:53 am
I like the fact that your placing a lot of emphasis on the fact that it was an 11-month anniversary. Like, the anniversary isn't THAT big, but you miss her so much, you just know how long....forget it, I'm starting to sound insane. :/
Comment by AngelLee: Jan 4, 2011 12:01 pm
thanks for the comments everyone
Comment by CutMeOpenWide: Dec 12, 2010 6:07 pm
oh wow. there is so much emotion in this that it hurts me, so amazing. you are amazing! but this sounds painful and sad.
Comment by heartfultears: Dec 12, 2010 1:38 pm
Awww I agree very sadSad face
Comment by AliMicShe: Dec 12, 2010 11:58 am
JEEZ...I agree with smtdl1823.
How sad :[
Comment by smtdl1823: Dec 12, 2010 10:38 am
this is a sad poem....very heark breaking must be...Sad face
Comment by Ashloii: Dec 12, 2010 4:07 am
heartbreaking .A.

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