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Only One

It only takes one smile to hide a million tears,

It only takes one "I'm fine" to hide all your fears.

Only one laugh to hide all your cries,

And only one giggle to hide all the lies.

One sigh to take away all of the pain,

One push to drive you insane.

It takes one yell to break you,

It takes one word to make nothing seem true.

But all of this you must hide.

You must not let anyone know you have lied.

Because it should only take one,

For you to say " I'm just...done".

by PrayForMe
posted on 12/10/2007

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Comments: 41

Comment by lonelywolf: Jul 26, 2010 6:22 pm
I like this a lot.
Comment by megsj: Dec 14, 2008 8:44 am
i really like this poem its amazing
Comment by beautifulxhjfxdisaster: Oct 7, 2008 6:50 am
i feel like you were sitting right in front of me and reading this.

it realtes to me so much.
thank you =]]
keep writing~~~~~
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jun 14, 2008 3:10 pm
wow this is awesome. i just..i can really relate to this. awesome poem.
Comment by LynnDoll: Mar 13, 2008 5:46 pm
truely amazing, it's really understandable, I love it for so many reasons!

Vote up! Smiley
Comment by breathtakingly1evil13: Feb 3, 2008 11:39 am
wow i love this it has awesome feeling's described and everything
Comment by starlight: Jan 9, 2008 11:52 am
wow......has anyone told u that u have a way of writing every feeling into a poem....creating an image to go with it and summarizing one's desires in simple words? Well....you do....this is amazing.....it really hits a soft spot in the heart and has a way of life
Comment by jasonfoolio: Jan 3, 2008 7:11 pm
very nice!!
Comment by virtualbubblewrap: Jan 1, 2008 10:35 am
this poem is amazingly true great job! Smiley
Comment by imperfect: Dec 28, 2007 1:26 pm
Love the poem.. keep it up. Smiley

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