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So Many lies

Just empty words with no meaning
Your lies I continue believing
Each one cutting away at my heart
My life itself you have torn apart
Promises where made
But there meanings soon will fade
Dark colors fill my vision
No I dont want your supervision
Don't try to control me
All I want is to be free
Why lie
Cause one day you will die
And judgement day will apear
Questionis will you be left here

by fullmoon65
posted on 11/10/2011

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Comments: 23

Comment by MONEYAL13: Feb 9, 2016 10:42 pm
very good please make more
Comment by Psychobabbled: Nov 27, 2015 10:33 pm
This is really good, I like it.
Comment by taybabe1300: Aug 31, 2012 2:38 pm
I love it. It's straight to the point and there's no need to question the meaning of anything.
Comment by Droconio: Mar 8, 2012 12:33 am
I love the way you relate love and judgement day Sticking tongue out
Comment by ToWritePoetryOnHerArms: Feb 12, 2012 5:40 pm
i love this its great, keep writing
Comment by Silvertonge: Jan 10, 2012 8:27 pm
oh goodness. So good!
Comment by melinda: Dec 25, 2011 4:29 pm
nice poem Smiley, your pain and sorrow is so strongly expressed in each verse beautifully.
Comment by cronus2533: Dec 23, 2011 8:35 am
Straight to the point.. very good..
Comment by jairo1223: Dec 16, 2011 1:39 am
niiice
Comment by caKezZ: Dec 7, 2011 7:56 pm
hmm....i like it alot!!!!

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