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Steven

Your name echos
through my thoughts
pounding like a heartbeat.

Can't eat
Can't sleep
that endless echo
slowely killing me.

Smile
and laugh.
I try to move on.
Your memory still haunts me.

A whiff of the cologne you wore
a wave of terror
encases me.

I want to scream
but that echo
slides into my mouth
and turns into glue.

I can't escape
this living nightmare.

It ticks me off
that you don't care.
That you don't know.
But I know
if you ever
were to come back
I would run away
as fast
as I could.
And wouldn't look back.

Screaming loud enough
so that noone
could hear me.

by sunshinegirl
posted on 01/27/2011

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Comments: 5

Comment by ITSaCRISIS: Apr 7, 2011 4:00 pm
bawling my eyes out just kidding, but i wou;ld if i were a girl, this was really good though, im impressed with ur talent
Comment by madihays: Apr 5, 2011 9:13 am
that is AWESOME!! i totally understand.. my ex is a butt hole.. but some times thatslife and y0ou have to move on.. because life is to vsluble to spend it with people who destroy you.. Smiley
Comment by google: Feb 4, 2011 8:53 am

I like the simplicity.
(slowely = slowly)

I read it a few times
and can't help feeling the poem could end after 4 stanzas,
like a quick Mediterranean breeze.
Comment by bloomingpain: Feb 3, 2011 12:39 pm
Wow! Very emotional and real..Can relate. Amazing poem!
Comment by dezzy: Jan 27, 2011 11:57 am
teartear wow beautiful

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