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Stop looking for him....


Im so lonely all I do is cry
My eyes and tears match the blue sky
I cry with the rain
so no one can tell that there are really tears on my face...

Im so lonely
I wish I was loved
I don't think I will ever be...
So forget everything.
I give up I can't find him
Maybe hes right before my eyes and I just don't know it...

Will I find him if I quit looking?

I know its a crappy poem.. but I felt like I had to write or something.. idk..

by Hiddenot
posted on 10/14/2009

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Comments: 8

Comment by JamesR: Jan 24, 2010 9:30 pm
It's ok to feel unloved. We all do once in a while. You can never be anything more than....human.
As for the poem; I actually liked it, the first stanza is quite good, saying two different things which essentially mean the same.
Comment by DarkAngel93: Dec 14, 2009 2:23 pm
nice poem tiffy.
Comment by Angel: Nov 16, 2009 11:01 am
i think its quite beautiful
Comment by xDestructive: Nov 3, 2009 6:43 pm
this is an all right poem, understandable. I remember when I broke up with my ex a while ago, and I was trying to get back together with her she said to me "the moment you stop looking for love, its that moment it will find you" idk. maybe the last line in here is right.. keep writing.
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Oct 16, 2009 3:46 am
Indeed. you don't need a man to feel loved.
You'll find love soon, I know it. Wonderful poem, hon.
Comment by brokenheartedarmysister: Oct 15, 2009 7:16 am
Sweetie you are loved....You don't need a man to feel loved
Comment by Babigurlbroken: Oct 14, 2009 5:00 pm
no poetry is crappy... it's merely expressing how you feel or what's on your mind. that's what makes it amazing...
Comment by Iridescent: Oct 14, 2009 4:15 pm
its not bad.. you just need more voice in it..but its still nice

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