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This Sorrow

I'm letting all my sorrow and sadness unto this one...be warned it hurts.....


This Sorrow...


What is this that I feel?
It's empty but it's real
This pain is unbearable..
My heart feels weak
Why was it my happiness and joy
The ones to go bleak?
God my heart is heavy with sorrow
God,please don't give me a tomorrow...
I won't withstand it,I wont bear it...
People trying to help me with their words...
Please just spare it.
My sorrow is great,my torment is greater
I'll save my sobs and cries for later.
My hearts been stabbed with a stake
O' God, what was my mistake?
It pierced through this aching heart
It ripped and shred and tore it apart..
I fell to my knees begging you please
MAKE THIS SORROW END,END IT FOR ME!
Yet I hear nothing and this nothingness lingers
Like the hole in my heart and awaiting a whisper
It says to me slowly "It's not your time"
As I scream and tremble "WHAT WAS MY CRIME!!?"
"To love and love too much,
For your heart was too haste and gently crushed,
Do not blame the person who hurt you so,
Yet blame yourself for letting her go,
Out in the darkness and left you alone
But you are to blame for loving her so."
I sob and I weep
yet to my true words I keep.
"I still love her and love her so
For she is the reason I still stand bold,
Yet I realize now that loving her isn't the problem,
It is my heart feeling the ache and alone as it is solemn.
It is truly my fault yet this love for her remains
And even if between us will never be the same
Even as my heart remains here in pain,
Soon..this pain will cure and this heart I will regain.


This is the feeling in my heart.......-J.

by ZanethRiku
posted on 01/13/2010

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Comments: 5

Comment by golddustgirl: Feb 21, 2010 10:07 am
This is really sad, but i enjoyed reading it knowing other people feel as i do sometimes
Comment by cyndel: Jan 15, 2010 1:27 pm
great way putting it into words. i really enjoyed reading it
Comment by fruitloop199: Jan 13, 2010 8:54 am
Beautiful...
Comment by ZanethRiku: Jan 13, 2010 5:43 am
Thank you
Comment by scarredemotions17: Jan 12, 2010 7:55 pm
that was amazingly beautiful yet sad. i am sorry for ur loss but yes ur heart will heal tho it may take lots of time. i don't know the story of ur love so i haven't much to say except that was beautifully written and i hope u heal ..

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