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Trading Hearts

If only we could trade Hearts for a day.
There's so much more that I need to say,
But I feel I must keep you still slightly at Bay
So I won't undoubtedly scare you away.

There's much my heart has had to endure
But in this moment I am almost sure,
That what we have is surely the cure
Because our comfort and passion is simple and pure.

If only we traded hearts for a moment in time
You would see from inside, that perfect rhyme
Showing that time is the perfect enzyme,
Creating catalytic reactions for the perfect crime...
Theft.
There's much my head has endured before.
Mind baffled, jaw dropped to the floor.
But looking forward there's so much more...
I do have dreams of finding the 1 man I can adore.

If only we could trade hearts here and now
I would proudly stand to take a bow
For the raw emotion that we unknowingly sow
To give us both a reason to be proud.

There's so much my eyes have had to see
Loving all the broken branches of my tree.
I know exactly what I want to be
But I still need to be set free so you can see me.

I wrote this last night, laying next to you in bed,
But please don't misinterpret what is said.
Just like anyone else, my heart bleeds red,
But from those fears I have fled.

by coldfire146
posted on 05/30/2019

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Tags: doubt
Comments: 3

Comment by prettyspl: Aug 17, 2019 12:30 am
Nice work .. maybe change or do away with so much rhyming and it would flow better?
Comment by ITSaCRISIS: Jun 9, 2019 5:18 am
I really felt what you were saying, as if we did trade hearts for a moment...
Comment by Nick1959: Jun 5, 2019 7:54 am
I like the idea of this poem, it expresses what many want to express. The rhyming could use some work other wise an interesting write.

Nick

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