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Trapped in Glorious Love

She holds my heart captive
within an indifferent cage
bars forged through hopes
and promises

She is a conversation
that lost its topic
yet I can not stop talking
though my breath is gone

I struggled against the tide
of inevitability
A sweeping current of lies
trickling out through my eyes

When the filth finally came
Spilling, almost gushing from
my mouth

I regretted everything

I will always love to hate
and hate I shall
for I so love you
if you could hate me too

by darksideofme
posted on 02/03/2014

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Tags: feel, like, im, hashtagging
Comments: 7

Comment by prettyspl: Apr 3, 2016 12:50 pm
I love this ... it's awesome!
Comment by lexiedanielle: Mar 19, 2014 11:35 am
Love this so much.
Comment by PoeticPrincess: Mar 14, 2014 11:13 pm
Nice analogies, I liked this.
Comment by kiraralee77: Mar 10, 2014 9:04 pm
Great write. Smiley Its emotional for sure and i can feel the frustration.. love sucks. Keep it up. ^^
Comment by LucidChimp: Feb 15, 2014 6:56 pm
"But that was then and you were young and I was blameless"

I just laughed my arse off.
Comment by MrGrunty: Feb 11, 2014 7:02 pm
Good to see you writing....and to know you are still breathing for that matter....even though you have at times been a pain in my ass. But that was then and you were young and I was blameless Smiley

I do like this write...kinda hung up on the last stanza...idk, maybe just me dealing with the deeds of a succubus in my own affairs and really trying not to hate.

But like I said, other than my personal issues, the rest of the write I love.

vote^^
Comment by EMSO: Feb 3, 2014 10:37 pm
The day PoQ gets hashtags, I'm leaving.

Jolly nice write.

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