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What I Fear Most

I sit at my desk alone and wonder
When did I begin to make these blunders?
Mistakes I make leave me so anxious
My fear consumes me and all my senses
Because of this will I die alone?
Or will I go through life as a lonely drone
A lonely shell of a man once strong
Who prays for love but holds his tongue
I wish security was known for certain
But with one mistake she’ll close the curtain
Leave me to sit a lonely man
Without a life or future plans
This reality leaves me so distraught
I beg to be buried and my corpse to rot
To live alone is no life for me
I’d give up my life so willingly
My fear of departing keeps us alive
I feel you’re ready for US to die
Well when you go you’ll take my heart
And I will never get a fresh start.

by ElvinLeon
posted on 09/16/2009

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Comments: 8

Comment by skbarbie9: Jul 27, 2010 12:17 pm
wonderful !! Smiley
Comment by SilentWords: Sep 21, 2009 12:58 pm
Mistakes I make leave me so anxious
My fear consumes me and all my senses
Because of this will I die alone?


Man can I relate to those lines.. I think we all die alone though... Sad eh.
Comment by tnhelos18: Sep 20, 2009 12:58 am
good job I really enjoyed it
Comment by DanceInside: Sep 16, 2009 10:56 pm
An amazing poem, reminds me somewhat of my own style although hopefully you don't perceive that as a bad thing or perhaps you disagree who knows. Nevertheless, An amazing poem and I urge you to continue to write.
Comment by Babigurlbroken: Sep 16, 2009 7:34 pm
forget the critics above. The obviously did not take the true time to analyze it, grammers happen, not everyone's perfect. The quality of the poem is all that matters.
Comment by Babigurlbroken: Sep 16, 2009 7:34 pm
You just managed to put how I feel at this moment into words for me. Thank you. This poem is so heartfelt and realistic, and I can almost feel your pain and worry when I read it.
Comment by SilentStorm: Sep 16, 2009 4:38 pm
aww wow u really liked this person.im not sayin that 'o u'll get over it' but u cant ALWAYS b miserable u still gotta live ur life would u want this other person being depressed? well u shouldnt.i luv ur poem tho it had a good flow
Comment by Luv4shelly: Sep 16, 2009 2:08 pm
I really like this poem, its really great just one little nitpicky thing its tounge not tong.

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