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When Love Dies

When love dies...everyone cries,
Many hearts are broken.

When love dies...loving words are forgotten,
Angry words are spoken.

When love dies...it takes with it,
A piece of each and every heart.

When love dies...and the broken heart heals,
Love gets a brand new start.

When love dies...let it go,
New loves may come and they too may go.

When love dies...it's not really the end;
For your heart will love again my friend.

by missingmom
posted on 09/24/2008

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Comments: 5

Comment by christi823: Feb 18, 2009 8:56 am
This makes me want to cry..
It's all too true.
But it inspired me and it gave me hope.
I just wish I could find the willpower to let it go..

Thank you for that amazing read.(:
Comment by monkeyboy2416: Feb 7, 2009 10:04 am
I have to say that you are brighter in your view than i am. But that isn't hard!
I agree with asdfyz, the broken first line gives the impression that you're fighting back tears.
Nicely done.
Comment by asdfyz: Sep 27, 2008 7:21 pm
very good. The broken-ness of it actually makes it flow better. great job.
Comment by PrettyOdd: Sep 27, 2008 12:51 pm
This is such a great poem. You have such an amazing talent.
Comment by meletha122694: Sep 25, 2008 3:23 am
what can I say but you are one exceptional poet.....Thank you so much for sharing this with us...

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