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A suicide

Quick!Tell the coroner young Blake has died
He suffered from a severe case of suicide
No one yet has learned the truth
Such a sad waste of life and youth
A scene of blood mixed with violence and gore
And there lay you blake dead on the floor

His hands still clenched onto his gun
His note sad nothing but “I suppose Im done”
Yet in the one eye still visible to see
A tear was apparent but as dark as the sea
There must have been pain in this young boys heart
Though that’s what the first bullet tore right apart

Also wounds on both of his wrists
Telling his story and life in a twist
No chance of survival after so many tactics
Whatever he wanted he was sure to attack it
So terrible is such a young ones ascension
Yet its quite apparent that was his intention.

by cwagnon
posted on 01/24/2008

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Comments: 63

Comment by Kumoriko: Oct 28, 2017 4:57 am
Comment by StopThinking: Nov 25, 2010 8:01 pm
Heart strings pulled on this one
Comment by brokenlovexoxo: Nov 22, 2010 10:29 am
i have read this one becore and i just keep comming back to read it. its a great poem i enjoy it. its sad, but thats what makes it readable. people can relast in someways..keep writing this is great
Comment by DarkestEtternity: Oct 18, 2010 10:46 pm
Comment by charliebrown: Mar 13, 2010 7:30 pm
pretty cool one
Comment by Heartbroken120: Jul 14, 2009 1:38 am
great poem. so sad.
Comment by rayne482: Jan 6, 2009 11:21 am
Good poem. I loved it. keep on writing.
Comment by guymcperson: Oct 7, 2008 2:44 pm
wow this is amazing its sad. but its one of the best ive heard u should be proud of this well done
Comment by Rebelgoddess: Sep 15, 2008 1:17 pm
Good Job. Well Written.
Comment by AshleyDawn: Aug 23, 2008 7:35 am
wow i love this poem its really good.

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