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Where am I Peter?
Where am I Paul?
My feet seem to teeter
I'm afraid I might fall

How did I get here?
How can this be?
My sight is unclear
But I'm afraid to see

Who is in on this guys?
Who would make such a plan?
My feet are tightly tied
But I'm afraid if I ran

When will I be let go?
When did I arrive?
I can't hear a soul
But I'm afraid of who's alive

Why did this happen?
Why is it me?
My body feels strapped in
But I'm afraid to be free

by ordinarycanary
posted on 06/05/2012

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Comments: 5

Comment by BloodyWrists: Jun 12, 2012 10:00 am
The last stanza concludes this well.
"My body feels strapped in
But I'm afraid to be free"
I like that..
Comment by prettyspl: Jun 7, 2012 11:17 am
Deliciously dark .. an ominous read. I love dark poetry and this is a wonderful expression of it.
Comment by SpeakeroftheSilent: Jun 5, 2012 10:14 pm
I love the structure and wording of this piece. Beautifully written, very relatable.
Comment by PoeticPrincess: Jun 5, 2012 7:01 pm
I love how the questions empower this poem.
"My body feels strapped in
But ?I'm afraid to be free"
I thought this was the perfect ending for the poem because of how it answered the many questions and beautifully conveyed the message. Wonderful write overall.
Comment by sleeplessdreamer: Jun 5, 2012 5:46 pm
This is beautifully written.

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