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Can You Count to Suicide?

One cut
Two cuts
Three cuts
Four
Blood drips off my wrists
And onto the floor
One pill
Two pills
Three pills
Four
One after another
This will be the cure
One shot
Two shots
Three shots
Four
Intoxicated
And then life will be no more
One attempt
Two attempts
Three attempts
Four
Five is my lucky number
Soon I will be dead for sure.


by taybabe1300
posted on 01/04/2014

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Tags: counting, cuts, take the pain away, alcohol, suicide attempts, attempts, can you count, pills
Comments: 6

Comment by Willowhisper: Feb 6, 2014 12:33 pm
Sounds more like a creepy nursery rhyme. I like it still though all the same.
Comment by PoeticPrincess: Jan 14, 2014 3:09 am
The childish style of writing is almost haunting, good write.
Comment by taybabe1300: Jan 9, 2014 2:32 am
Eh, I'm alright, thank you for your concern. Also, thank you for the compliments Smiley
Comment by downwiththemoon: Jan 6, 2014 8:32 pm
I can relate to this a lot and I think you hit the nail right on the head. I hope you are doing alright, love
Comment by bookslol12: Jan 5, 2014 9:26 pm
A new way to do it. I like the way you did it and I like the meaning. I hope you don't feel this way. I've been there and know it sucks. If I'm honest I still sometimes feel that way though I will never admit to anyone I know.
Keep writing and finding you.
-Books

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Comment by emofaith: Jan 5, 2014 7:59 am
i kinda sing this poem instead of plain reading it,

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