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Candles

As the candles start to flicker
and the flashlight goes out
no one else is near,
so i can't scream and shout.

while im sitting alone,
in this dimly lit room
and only 3 candles left,
over my life, they seem to loom...*

now one candle's out
and my heartbeat begins to fade.
now i'll start to wonder,
why the rooms a darker shade.

now the second candle's gone
and my breathing begins to hallow
and i guess i see the pattern
so maybe my life's soon to follow...

And with the final candle's last breathe
i breath mine as well
the clock strikes midnight,
and im gone from the living hell.


*that ones kinda a weird word, i dont really like that line :X

R+R and i'll give you a cookie 0:]

by CassidyEarly
posted on 11/04/2007

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Comments: 7

Comment by CassidyEarly: Mar 17, 2008 4:21 am
thanks ^_^
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 16, 2008 1:53 pm
great poem it was very creative
Comment by CassidyEarly: Nov 5, 2007 6:13 pm
.::gives a cookie to both darkartisticgurl and beckizzle54::. :]
Comment by Beckizzle454: Nov 5, 2007 7:33 am
Love it Smiley
Comment by darkartisticgurl: Nov 4, 2007 5:31 pm
i thought i was very creative and good
Comment by CassidyEarly: Nov 4, 2007 3:12 pm
.::gives a cookie::. :]
Comment by MechanicalAnimal: Nov 4, 2007 1:03 pm
Very good Smiley

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