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Darkness Within

Oh so deep.
This dismal basin.
Oh so bleak.
My darkness within.
I scream, I cry.
Blood covers my skin.
No matter how I try,
I can never win.
The battle is too intense,
too immense.
It lacks all sense,
all pretense.
Yet it continues,
festering in my mind.
Someday in you, too.
That day your sanity cries.
Then dies.

by Xenoz
posted on 10/23/2009

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Comments: 49

Comment by DarkestEtternity: Oct 18, 2010 10:51 pm
love it!!!!!!
Comment by DarkestEtternity: Sep 9, 2010 5:03 pm
agreed. great poem
Comment by PanicWrists: Dec 19, 2009 1:13 am
amazing i feel the pain yo keep it up
Comment by tinatina09: Dec 5, 2009 9:28 pm
I love it!!!
Comment by Justashadow: Dec 1, 2009 9:34 pm
yeah i agree,..its good
Comment by Runaway7203: Dec 1, 2009 5:58 pm
wow this great!!!
Comment by RickyDead: Nov 26, 2009 8:35 pm
i would say 7/10 in all .. keep up da good work !
Comment by xSWEETxDECAYxOFxFLESHx: Nov 16, 2009 12:58 pm
this is a good one
Comment by KillCourtney: Nov 15, 2009 7:13 pm
I reallyreally like this.
Comment by Xenoz: Nov 11, 2009 10:19 am
Thanks everybody!!! Did not expect this many comments and this many good reviews!=D

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