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The world is dark, in times like these we must stay bright,
For if we do not we will at some point become the darkness we despise.
Look ahead and never turn back, if you do you'll forever close your sight,
In that sense, well.. what's the point in life?

What even is the point to live? Why, oh why?
I do what I can with the cards I was dealt,
I try, I try and continuously I try!
At what point will something give? I'm not as bad off as some, but can you feel what I've felt? Can you understand the life I've lived?

I'm not sure, but I think I might need help..

Written by my good friend - London

by romantichomicide
posted on 10/08/2018

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Tags: sad
Comments: 2

Comment by Nick1959: Dec 9, 2018 5:52 am
I agree with mute on all points.

Nick
Comment by FavoriteTheMute: Oct 18, 2018 4:53 pm
I'm pretty sure he/she needs help indeed. I hope he/she finds it.

The world is dark sometimes. There is light though as well and it's great to focus on that so that we're not consumed by darkness. Great sentiment.

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