Poem of Quotes Members


I breathe out the disease
And breathe in the purity
Out goes destruction
In comes completion
Out is the misery
In is the pleasure
The bliss of rapture
I could never reach before
I breathe out the infection
A virus that has been killing me
The affliction I couldn’t rid myself of
Until now
I breathe in delight, joy, ecstasy
A release I have been yearning
Liberated from the pain
Finally, I am me

by rayne482
posted on 04/21/2010

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Comments: 4

Comment by Davidjr: Aug 17, 2010 8:48 am
great work!
Comment by waterwitch: Apr 22, 2010 1:20 pm
very nice.how did you manage the 'every word flows' thing? i can't even get that. congrads on the new transformation.it must've felt liberating.
Comment by SilentStorm: Apr 21, 2010 2:14 pm
AWWW.. cool beans this is really good
Comment by RooftopsAndRaindrops: Apr 21, 2010 1:49 pm
That's beautiful. Congratulations on being yourself Smiley

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