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Help

Falling through the black,
Hiting every ledge along the way.
I'm way past Oblivion,
And I can't get out.

Non stop horrific thoughts,
Fill my mind,
Corrupting, destroying,
like a demon on the loose.

I want you to help me,
But if you aren't going to,
Just leave me here,
To my own demise.

I don't want your pity.
I know you don't mean it.
Don't try and make me beleive,
That you actualy care and want to help.

Things I took for granted as being their,
have just gotten worse.
They now fill my head,
And make me think I am crazy.

I tried to ask for help,
But they won't beleive me.
What did I do,
To deserve this pain?

I feel people watching me,
I sometimes here noises,
And they are turning to voices,
Voices that kill me inside.

I can't help counting things,
Orginising them, hording them.
Doing things almost religiosly,
And I can't help it.

Why is it that,
Everything I do,
Must be wrong,
And must be done again?

Never have I been told,
I done something right,
Or I did something well.
Only being told I'm wrong.

As I get worse,
I fear for myself.
Not only myself,
But, the people I love aswell.

Who knows what I might do,
When I finaly snap,
And can't take it anymore?
Maybe I should be locked away.

Locked away,
Where I can't hurt myself,
Or anyone else.
It just seems like the right thing to do.

As I fall through,
This black pit I call life,
I scream into the abyss,
One word, hoping for an answer:


"Help"

by guymcperson
posted on 04/20/2009

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Comments: 4

Comment by Luv4shelly: Apr 20, 2009 2:04 pm
this is a great poem!
Comment by Lithia: Apr 20, 2009 1:11 pm
this is perfect i love it
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Apr 20, 2009 8:24 am
Amazing poem. I've felt like that before.
Comment by azaLea: Apr 20, 2009 7:53 am
Great poem..

Love this lines,

"I want you to help me,
But if you aren't going to,
Just leave me here,
To my own demise.

I don't want your pity.
I know you don't mean it.
Don't try and make me beleive,
That you actualy care and want to help."

Keep Writing..

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