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My mind,
it begins to slip.
My thoughts,
they begin to drip.

My memory,
slowly it fails.
My life,
quickly de-rails.

This is the result,
However disasterous it seems,
of me being away from you,
I'm left with nothing but dreams.

by Xenoz
posted on 10/22/2009

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Comments: 14

Comment by gibbs: Nov 12, 2009 9:18 am
sad poem... easy to relate to votes up
Comment by Xenoz: Nov 11, 2009 10:21 am
Thanks everyone!!! I'm glad you all like it=)
Comment by flippinthrulife17: Nov 6, 2009 5:43 am
Hmmm...I understand this! It's really good, you worded these feelings so well! ...saddening too, in the least but wonderful!
Comment by Goingnowhere: Nov 3, 2009 1:59 pm
I love your poems you always do an amazing job
Comment by mybeloved: Nov 2, 2009 4:16 pm
i love this and i totally relate
Comment by HellSpike: Nov 1, 2009 8:11 am
great poem dude Smiley
Comment by MoonViolet: Oct 30, 2009 1:20 pm
You are a very great Poet.Keep up the great work!
Comment by xmyxlastxbreathx: Oct 30, 2009 1:01 am
I totally love this! -votes up-
Keep up the great writing!
Comment by SweetTea: Oct 27, 2009 7:28 pm
Great! This is part of lifeSmiley
Comment by Clvisugo: Oct 22, 2009 2:50 pm
Thumbs up!

Think this is true to everyone at some time!!

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