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Now they cry

She's on the edge
feet dangling below
she knows if she jumps
there's a long way to go

But she's weighing her options
and setting things straight
cause she's tiered of being
controlled by her own fate

She thinks she old enough
and that she can choose
She knows what's best
and she has nothing to loose

she's tiered of living
and life's just a game
one you can't win
with blood, tears and pain

And she turns around
to a noise on the roof
there stands her family
aware not aloof

Her mother's in tears
and her dad is upset
but she promised herself
she wouldn't regret

So she went to the edge
turned around to face them
her tears raining down
like tiny glass gems

She starts to fall
and waves good bye
and now like her
they're starting to cry

by Darkdaydreamer
posted on 04/29/2010

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Comments: 189

Comment by Kumoriko: Oct 28, 2017 4:40 am
Well ****... :/ Loved it.
Comment by prettyspl: Oct 9, 2016 11:11 pm
Depressing but current ..
Comment by Psychobabbled: Oct 9, 2016 6:07 pm
Brilliant poem here, I enjoyed reading.
Comment by poptartbananza: Jul 3, 2012 3:33 pm
Wow. Sad, but really good..
Comment by BloodyWrists: Jun 3, 2012 7:59 am
I enjoyed this poem. Good write!
Comment by Silverone: Jan 12, 2012 8:11 am
Very sad.... Sad face I like it though
Comment by bellem123: Jan 10, 2012 5:01 am
very good poem very good choice of wording
Comment by bulletsxandxlies: Nov 23, 2011 6:52 pm
really awesome poem!
Comment by OneDay07: Sep 22, 2011 7:48 am
Very good poem! Dark but amazing!
Comment by ElenaH: Sep 18, 2011 2:24 pm
great job ! love this poem especially the ending

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