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Shades of Pain

The last three years printed upon her wrists
An eternity of sorrow held between her finger tips
A blackout.. her mind slips..
What happens next?
Like the salty waves of the atlantic
Crashing against the rocks on the shore
The tears spill from her eyes
As her world becomes no more.
What happens next?
The eyes of the unseen burn into her head
They stare at the misfit who seems to just wander through the halls
They point at the girl with scars on her wrists
And mock the one with the tear stained cheeks.
What happens next?
The days pass by without a single breath..
The halls echoing with the presence of the unseen
The lockers reflect the silhouette of the broken one
Emptiness screams like the roar of the wind at the top of everest..
What happens next?

by IrOcKmYoWnSoX
posted on 10/24/2009

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Comments: 6

Comment by ccampion: Oct 30, 2009 5:32 pm
goodness.A lot of feeling.
Comment by dyingroselost15: Oct 29, 2009 8:03 pm
lots of emotion. i believe we al ask the question what happens next truely great
Comment by SweetTea: Oct 27, 2009 7:13 pm
This was really good! Great work!
Comment by Xenoz: Oct 25, 2009 10:03 am
Definitely good!
Comment by Iridescent: Oct 23, 2009 9:00 pm
very good
Comment by scarredemotions17: Oct 23, 2009 7:12 pm
huh that was a good poem but i personally don't understand the name if anything it should of been called what happens next u know what i mean. but its not my poem to name so great poem keep it up

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