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Interminable rivulet of ache drips down my sorrowed cheek
enduring this pain you subconsciously cause, makes me weak
Accustomed to this creatures negligent hurt
Battered, bruised, my sore encasing left to rot in the dirt

Wiping my face of your imposition as I pull myself off the ground
Hearing the voices, spreading their endless lies, haunt, swirling around
Running feet pound, a desperate escape, rushing through the anguish
Mechanically leading to the one place I could rest my languish

Fraught fingers fumble, in search of the light
Its dim glow a hope to persist in my fight
Fatigue influencing my cause, the path grows extensive
Out of breath, and losing, my frantic stride disregards its objective

Recognizing, the seeping dark, its familiar rapture
My befuddled psyche flusters, a last surrendering fracture
Beyond in the distance a small tree bends with the weather
I understand its predicament, stimulated I pull myself together

Finally I reach my destination, unperturbed, snug in security
Where alas your destruction can not reach, my solace a purity
Allowing my thoughts to stray, distracted by the caressing grass
Closing my eyes as time ceases to matter, consumed in its lapse

Not wanting you to witness this binding abrasion
The inflicted lexis lashed across my face, a mortification
Knowing that it can never heal
Like all things this is too real

by xDxReneexBosqx
posted on 07/17/2009

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Comments: 16

Comment by MsSchizo: Oct 16, 2009 9:59 am
Wow, this is one of those poems where I can totally see imagery in my head! ^-^
Comment by CallumNorman: Jul 25, 2009 9:51 am
wo! you're good!
Comment by deville: Jul 24, 2009 8:36 pm
very nice job. totally dripping with emotions.... I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by Elizajh: Jul 20, 2009 11:32 am
i know that everyone keeps commenting on this, but you really do have an amazing vocabulary! at first when it i was like "great a long poem I'm gonna have to sit through." But it was well worth it. It was captivating and unique and i really like it. Great job.
Comment by dthomas89: Jul 20, 2009 3:25 am
great poem
Comment by xXJennyKrisstyXx: Jul 19, 2009 7:03 am
Okay....Domino you have literally brought me to tears. =D
Yet as always from what I excepted from you. =)
You never cease to amaze me with your talent.
Yet as always my dear enemy/best friend.
Great job and I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
Comment by LydiaLorieau: Jul 18, 2009 6:57 pm
this is one of the most talented poems i have read on here, if not themost...it's so full of imagery. I'm new here but I really like your poems.
Comment by Vaurien: Jul 18, 2009 2:51 pm
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Jul 18, 2009 2:35 pm
haha I've always had a big vocabulary,obviously you do too and you use it very well.Your work once again is very good.I considerably liked the second stanza best,I can relate to it most I think.My favorite line in the whole poem was:
Hearing the voices,spreading their endless lies,haunt, swirling around.

Verrrrry Good!!
Comment by patto27: Jul 18, 2009 5:45 am

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