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The First Werewolf

With the rising of the moon,
my demons want to play.
Reality disappears,
my reason leaves with day.

I break down my walls
as the change overtakes.
I stare at this monster
the nighttime creates.

My throat burns with desire,
a yearning for blood.
My teeth are stained red
my fur caked with mud.

The power rushes through me
through this animal I've become.
My muscles quiver under fur,
and I begin to run.

So fast, so strong,
I feel like I'm on top of the world.
Though I know at the sunrise
I'm just an average girl.

Darting past trees,
flying through the wind of night.
I've never felt so free.
Nothings felt so right.

My heart has turned to ice.
My soul has run away.
I'll soon have my emotions back
when I see the light of day.

I see you in the distance
and the anger is in the lead.
I want to hear you cry.
I want to see you bleed.

But before I end your life
you get a glance into my eyes.
You see all of te pain you've caused.
Your disbelief, your lies.

by sunshinegirl
posted on 02/24/2011

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Comments: 6

Comment by darkenedangel: May 4, 2011 6:31 am
It has great imagery and its just really good. Good vocab. Lovely. Smiley
Comment by sk8ergurl2o: May 3, 2011 7:38 am
good
Comment by ITSaCRISIS: Apr 7, 2011 3:41 pm
haha yea, she might be better than u, kas
Comment by KAS: Mar 4, 2011 12:45 pm
I hate this because its better than my werewolf poems. looks like i have a challenge.
Comment by williambrown: Mar 3, 2011 12:01 am
You're using quite a broad vocabulary, and it really helps with the imagery, and prevents it from getting boring. It's depressing how free you feel in your dreams, and then it crashes back down when you wake up. I really feel what you're trying to portray here.
Comment by Maks: Feb 24, 2011 6:52 am
Wow. I loveee this. Loved the way the whole picture is described, the imagery is beautiful, rhymes are wonderful, poem is beautiful!

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