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When She Fell

…and when she fell

A supernova gleaming in the distance, peaking through the ages
Silent in the awe of her beauty

A giant smitten with the stars
Feuding with the passion of orgasmic flair

In crescendo she impales the sun

Silhouettes cast long lifetimes, flash frozen against the backdrop of ebon hue
Crematoria in ruin in the aftermath of the fall

Passion dying in the starlight

Comical innuendo
Written in moonlight, all for not in the sun’s despair

….and when she fell

I suffered scarlet wounds
That bleed the universe over

A rancid duality, this state of being in love and ruin

by deadiam
posted on 07/18/2017

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Comments: 3

Comment by prettyspl: Feb 7, 2018 3:40 am
Re-read this and love it as much or maybe more this time around! Just so freakin beautiful! Can we vote twice? Smiley
Comment by Nick1959: Jan 15, 2018 5:17 am
This is just lovely.
Comment by prettyspl: Aug 9, 2017 4:54 am
One of the most beautiful pieces I've had the pleasure to read. I find this poem simply exquisite! Vote!

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