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Drunken Deer

I once saw a deer
with a bottle of beer
I was near and could hear
that he beat up the cashier
I let out a loud cheer
to know that the deer was fierce
i look down to see a shadow appear
I turn around to see a very fierce deer
and all i could say was "Oh Dear!

by HeartlessShadow
posted on 10/09/2008

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Comments: 6

Comment by Mykel15: Feb 5, 2009 7:33 am
Run! lol
Comment by poemwrittingpipsqueek: Oct 14, 2008 2:53 pm
great
Comment by friendZdogZ: Oct 13, 2008 1:01 pm
lol
wow this is totally ironic lol
funny.
great job on it
Comment by Ambzie: Oct 10, 2008 1:08 pm
That's rate good , I love the end bit! x
Comment by USArocker: Oct 10, 2008 12:25 am
whoa that's a scary deer. Poor cashier D:
Comment by PoetProdigy: Oct 9, 2008 3:48 pm
lol light spirited good poem Smiley

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