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Yet Again, Here I Am

How many days has it been?
Since my poems you have seen
I couldn’t possibly count
The huge gathering amount

But while I have been away
My schedule has been packed everyday
Crawling through worded snake pits
Screaming at every letter and hit

The excruciating agony and pain
As I fell victim to lava’s boiling rain
My body is now marked with scars
Where I was beaten with hot iron bars

My eyes deep valley’s of experienced fear
As on my cheek forms a single tear
Showing my journey through the unknown
Letting you see what I suffered alone

Blood boiling in frozen veins
As slowly out leaks my pain
Blackness surrounds my irises like pools
This torture I experienced is called school

by CutMeOpenWide
posted on 03/18/2011

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Comments: 8

Comment by demonmagic: Nov 15, 2011 11:26 am
Hi-five.
Seriously.
Nailed it.
Open smile
Comment by ddog1955: Apr 25, 2011 7:03 pm
I love dark humour. Keep it up
Comment by TheRanged: Apr 19, 2011 12:17 pm
LOL
I lot's of potential there.
Do continue
Comment by madihays: Apr 6, 2011 6:28 pm
i really like it Smiley its weird.. but funny Smiley
Comment by xClarindaRevainex: Mar 29, 2011 3:13 am
Brilliant writing! And its funny in its own way sort of dark meets humour, I like it!
Comment by BNAchilles: Mar 25, 2011 5:26 pm
funny stuff dude
Comment by CutMeOpenWide: Mar 19, 2011 7:35 pm
its not really funny, just didnt know the category
Comment by MrQuixotic: Mar 18, 2011 8:34 pm
At first when I was reading this I was thinking . . . "What is this? This isn't funny? This is terrible." But then I read the last line and I laughed pretty hard. Ah, the joys of high school . . . .

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