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Burn

life was full but empty
cold but hot to the touch
you were caring yet always the razor
cutting my skin but always in the shape of aheart
i was burning but jovial
smiling my life into oblivion

now i burn with a fire
inside
outside
catharsis
released
set myself free
an optimism takes me
i remember
self
you
will be a first
but not a last
a memory
but never a regret
a smile
never a curse

but for now I am simply
gone
like the fire burnt out
I will always
burn on

by asdfyz
posted on 03/09/2011

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Comments: 1

Comment by azaLea: Mar 9, 2011 7:34 am
"i remember
self
you
will be a first
but not a last"

I don't really get that part, but I like this one,

"life was full but empty
cold but hot to the touch
you were caring yet always the razor
cutting my skin but always in the shape of aheart
i was burning but jovial
smiling my life into oblivion"

Nice poem..

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