Poem of Quotes Members

Indevious

Not worth saying
What would indifference say
Is it worth to say it anyway
even thou
meaning is lost
between the lines of asking
to know the truth
no answers you will find
for silence speaks in visions
distorded by the clouded eye.

What would incompentence say?
Imagination works both ways
what you feel or taste, where is the
drawned line between our dreams,
is it knowing that
consciousness is the only witness
all knowing and all seeing.
Answers are incompetence non the less,
freedom lies in pretending the obvious.



by nocturnus
posted on 01/11/2019

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Comments: 3

Comment by Nick1959: Feb 28, 2019 1:39 pm
I agree it is like a complex abstract painting with several layers. I keep finding different threads of though laced within these lines. It is amazing how you wrote this

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Nick
Comment by prettyspl: Feb 19, 2019 11:28 pm
I kind of know what ITSaCRISIS means. If I look at this as a painting and not a poetry piece .. I’d see abstract jagged pieces. Great work!
Comment by ITSaCRISIS: Feb 11, 2019 8:57 am
If this was a painting I would keep seeing more meaning the longer I look at it. Good work, got some misspellings in it if you want to fix that.

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