Poem of Quotes Members

Let go

Shatter on the hearth.
In my heart.
Realizing its end of mirth,
as we are separated apart.
How can it be? we are juxtapose.
Like fragerance and beauty of a rose.
We are trapped in a serious game.
By the nature,it is to be blamed.
It tries to fail us hard.
Perhaps our bond,is efficient to guard.
The promise of togetherness,will forever fight the foes.
And,we'll never,I m sure....
LET GO....

by Kavya
posted on 07/29/2010

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Comments: 9

Comment by Kavya: Sep 26, 2011 7:03 am
Thanks a lot my friends....
Comment by toxicchubakka: Sep 26, 2011 3:05 am
is it mirth or myrth did i fall or was i pushed
Comment by ScarletSorrows: Oct 1, 2010 6:30 am
this is outstanding wow u made me use a big word lol!
Comment by PRIYA: Aug 6, 2010 9:47 am
yeah,I agree with them,this is really wonderfull
Comment by skbarbie9: Aug 2, 2010 9:30 am
interesting Smiley
Comment by BloodyWrists: Jul 30, 2010 7:43 pm
this is really good.
i like this poem=]

(and i dont think it needs a new title. "Let Go" serves it well!)
Comment by kategibson33gibson: Jul 30, 2010 5:36 am
You are a great writer..this is a very beautiful poem
Comment by BehindTheseGreenEyes: Jul 29, 2010 11:33 am
Very captivating.Nice way to write feelings,beautiful way to use words.Great job
Comment by Skater4life: Jul 29, 2010 10:54 am
very vivid i loved how you used ur words so precise beautifully done my dear

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