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I Will Dance

I'll dance the song
Your heart sings
Because I know
It sings for me

I'll follow the rhythm
Your heart beats
Because I know
It beats for me

I'll give the love
Your heart breaths
Because I know
It breaths for me

I'll take the love
Your heart leaves
Because you know
Thats what I need

by aCrazyApe
posted on 05/09/2008

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Comments: 13

Comment by sk8ergurl2o: Dec 16, 2010 6:45 am
really good and sweet
Comment by SarahGoesRawr: May 19, 2010 12:00 pm
dayumm Snoman, how meany times you gonna comment on this one?!
Hahaha, i love this poem,(:
Comment by moomoo: Mar 17, 2010 12:05 pm
I think that it is a very sweet poem and I really think who your talking about should be happy. I also love the way you put what you think and feel down.
Comment by Snoman: Mar 16, 2010 1:19 am
you know whats funny...
the more i come back and read your poems the more i enjoy them...
and the more i miss them
you really need to get back online dude...
Comment by Penny: Sep 7, 2008 11:56 pm
omg cutest poem in the entire world!! awwww!! haha.
Comment by Snoman: Sep 7, 2008 1:46 am
ok now reading it again when im too tired to even consider DDR... i must say this is a good poem Sticking tongue out so yeah disregard my last comment and just remember this one Sticking tongue out
i like this poem
oh and get on and write some more!!! Sticking tongue out
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jun 20, 2008 6:29 pm
yea dude this is cute!
Comment by crazyLILthingcalledLoVe: Jun 17, 2008 8:24 pm
Awww super cute poem Smiley
For some reason I never thought you would write these kinds of poems....Your words dont really match your outward appearence. No Offense, just a though.
YOu know what? just forget I said that LoL
Great Poem!!!! Smiley
Comment by Snoman: May 15, 2008 11:37 pm
yeah part of me decided that the "I Will Dance" should be the StepMania part of your life. since you don't dance the music of her heart, it's just a beat... bump bump... bump bump... you dance songs like Dum Dadi Do and AAA
sorry but i don't want this poem here anymore... i wanna ddr poem now Sad face
just thought i'd throw it out there ya know Sticking tongue out
Comment by Snoman: May 10, 2008 12:06 am
yeah this is a good one too Smiley i think i liked the last one better in the sense it had an emotional connection... odd that nobody else had commented... but yeah this one's good. personally i'd get rid of all of the "always" in because always _____ parts because it'd sounds better in my head but then again that's just me and we read things differnetly Sticking tongue out hexa good bro Open smile

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