I Will Dance

really good and sweet

dayumm Snoman, how meany times you gonna comment on this one?!
Hahaha, i love this poem,(:

I think that it is a very sweet poem and I really think who your talking about should be happy. I also love the way you put what you think and feel down.

you know whats funny...
the more i come back and read your poems the more i enjoy them...
and the more i miss them
you really need to get back online dude...
seriously

omg cutest poem in the entire world!! awwww!! haha.

ok now reading it again when im too tired to even consider DDR... i must say this is a good poem so yeah disregard my last comment and just remember this one
i like this poem
oh and get on and write some more!!!

yea dude this is cute!

Awww super cute poem
For some reason I never thought you would write these kinds of poems....Your words dont really match your outward appearence. No Offense, just a though.
YOu know what? just forget I said that LoL
Great Poem!!!!

yeah part of me decided that the "I Will Dance" should be the StepMania part of your life. since you don't dance the music of her heart, it's just a beat... bump bump... bump bump... you dance songs like Dum Dadi Do and AAA
sorry but i don't want this poem here anymore... i wanna ddr poem now
just thought i'd throw it out there ya know

yeah this is a good one too i think i liked the last one better in the sense it had an emotional connection... odd that nobody else had commented... but yeah this one's good. personally i'd get rid of all of the "always" in because always _____ parts because it'd sounds better in my head but then again that's just me and we read things differnetly hexa good bro