A Shadows' Kiss~

Theres much desire and passion in loves hidden mysteries. And joy and happiness when the hidden steps from the shadows this is great! Keep up the work.

very good... beautiful

very good! have not read such a love poem as this in a long time.

it's great, more than most people have in real life

Aww, I luvv it! =]] its b~e~a~utiful!

love it nice

That was quite extrodinary my dear. It was like Romeo and Juliet, Triston and Isolde. I applaude to you and take my bow. Keep up the good work, for as writers, we inspire all.

Raven Varcolak

oh as depressing and confuing as my comment was i still found your poem wondefully written and voted xxxx

it would be nice to be able to say a lover who is determined to keep your and his fling a secret loves you, however theres so much doubt on whether this is true otherwise why hide from the eyes of the moon? so maybe sharing the physical embraces so strongly, (in a secret) is to make up for the lover who is dying to scream thier love to the world her way to keep the angry hurt longing emotion away maybe the relationship has to be a secret so one of the lovers has to hide how they feel alone and so distant to him she sticks around to fill in for the lack of his emotion

i only see this poem this way through past experience and the way the poem brought everything back to me from a dead creul relationship thanks you help me open my eyes and think xxx kisses xxx

love it