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A Shadows' Kiss~

To Kiss In The Shadows'

In a shadow we kiss,
We hide from the moon,
Are hidden hugs are few, and over to soon.
In a whisper we talk,
Afraid to be heard, when people are near,
We speak not a word.
Our bond is but a lonely secret, together we sigh.
For just one brief moment we embrace, under the sky.

To french kiss in the sunlight,
And to shout at the moon:
'Behold and believe what you see, behold that my Lover Loves Me!'.

To Kiss In The Sunlight.

by Eric G
posted on 07/16/2007

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Comments: 30

Comment by connectionlost: Oct 4, 2011 3:33 pm
Theres much desire and passion in loves hidden mysteries. And joy and happiness when the hidden steps from the shadows Smiley this is great! Keep up the work.
Comment by anonymousme: May 5, 2011 8:22 am
very good... beautiful
Comment by VaeVictus: Jan 5, 2008 5:58 am
very good! have not read such a love poem as this in a long time.
Comment by leadme2temptation: Dec 13, 2007 9:39 pm
it's great, more than most people have in real life
Comment by XxiLoveHimxX: Dec 4, 2007 10:46 am
Aww, I luvv it! =]] its b~e~a~utiful!
Comment by romantichomicide: Dec 3, 2007 11:00 pm
love it nice
Comment by VampyressCorvina: Nov 28, 2007 3:05 pm
That was quite extrodinary my dear. It was like Romeo and Juliet, Triston and Isolde. I applaude to you and take my bow. Keep up the good work, for as writers, we inspire all.

Raven Varcolak
Comment by xxKittenxx: Nov 28, 2007 6:54 am
oh as depressing and confuing as my comment was i still found your poem wondefully written and voted xxxx
Comment by xxKittenxx: Nov 28, 2007 6:52 am
it would be nice to be able to say a lover who is determined to keep your and his fling a secret loves you, however theres so much doubt on whether this is true otherwise why hide from the eyes of the moon? so maybe sharing the physical embraces so strongly, (in a secret) is to make up for the lover who is dying to scream thier love to the world her way to keep the angry hurt longing emotion away maybe the relationship has to be a secret so one of the lovers has to hide how they feel alone and so distant to him she sticks around to fill in for the lack of his emotion

i only see this poem this way through past experience and the way the poem brought everything back to me from a dead creul relationship thanks you help me open my eyes and think xxx kisses xxx
Comment by nevagoodenoughx3: Nov 25, 2007 11:57 pm
love it

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